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Do You by ~Fololo:iconFololo:

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Do you like me?
Do you hate me?
Do you care to even know me?
Do you...?

I just want to know
Just go with the flow
I need some answers
To make it clear

I will lend an ear
So open up, my dear
I will do the same for you
If you could tell me the truth

Do you love me?
Do you want me?
Do you even want to know my name?
Do you...?

I want to love you forever
We will be together
Keeping one another safe
Moving at a wondrous pace

So...

Do you need me?
Do you lust for me?
Do you even care to come after me?
Do you...?
©2008 ~Fololo
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A rather different piece...

Rather interesting from me to come up with different stuff using different styles and flavors. I'm always trying different things with my poetry. And I hope it shows I'm trying to be unique.

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~TheNihilistChrist:iconTheNihilistChrist: May 3, 2008, 10:40:43 PM
Lol, this sounds like it could be a song by Madonna.

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I like :)

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~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 7, 2008, 3:32:33 PM
"Do you?"... it reminds me of the song by Ne-Yo, "Because of you".
Nice poem <3

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